Post by Stelpher on Aug 10, 2014 0:08:39 GMT -5
Okay, first things first - Welcome to the Nexus, please feel free to introduce yourself in the 'Introductions' area.
Next, i am not a moderator, therefor you can ignore the following if you choose, or i can have it deleted by you or a moderator's request. The following will just be a few questions and suggestions to do with your character.
1. History. I'm afraid your history was a little short, not in length but in detail. It did not explain many things, such as how Kyle's parents died, how he has ties with the brotherhood, ect. It's all a little vague.
2. Wounds. In the backstory, Kyle is attacked by Raiders and was inflicted with gashes on the face and chest. I am unsure how he would recover just by simply wiping clothe over it. I'm pretty sure he'd at least need to properly bandage them, and then seek medical attention when he reaches the next town.
3. Armour. I not sure i quite understand his armour. The steel Chestplate and Spoulders (shoulder pads). Do you mean like that of power armour? Or just cobbled together with a ton of scrap metal. Either way, it would be appreciated if you could clear that up.
4. Pipboy. In the Fallout cannon, pipboy's require certain tools to remove, and without these tools, you'd pretty much have to remove someones arm to get the pipboy. Oddly enough, inside of the Fallout games (3 and New Vegas at least) there are little inconsistencies with this. Because of this, you'll have to ask the moderators to see whether or not they'll allow it, as i'm sure plenty of people have done it before.
That's all from me.
Next, i am not a moderator, therefor you can ignore the following if you choose, or i can have it deleted by you or a moderator's request. The following will just be a few questions and suggestions to do with your character.
1. History. I'm afraid your history was a little short, not in length but in detail. It did not explain many things, such as how Kyle's parents died, how he has ties with the brotherhood, ect. It's all a little vague.
2. Wounds. In the backstory, Kyle is attacked by Raiders and was inflicted with gashes on the face and chest. I am unsure how he would recover just by simply wiping clothe over it. I'm pretty sure he'd at least need to properly bandage them, and then seek medical attention when he reaches the next town.
3. Armour. I not sure i quite understand his armour. The steel Chestplate and Spoulders (shoulder pads). Do you mean like that of power armour? Or just cobbled together with a ton of scrap metal. Either way, it would be appreciated if you could clear that up.
4. Pipboy. In the Fallout cannon, pipboy's require certain tools to remove, and without these tools, you'd pretty much have to remove someones arm to get the pipboy. Oddly enough, inside of the Fallout games (3 and New Vegas at least) there are little inconsistencies with this. Because of this, you'll have to ask the moderators to see whether or not they'll allow it, as i'm sure plenty of people have done it before.
That's all from me.
