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Post by droglog2 on Jan 3, 2016 22:15:00 GMT -5
Character name: Xandrek Serenus Nickname: none Race: Human Sex: Male Age:24 Birthplace: Rivet City
Height: 6'2 Weight:179 lbs Eye color: Blue Hair color: Black Hair style: Ragged, long uncut Facial Hair: Surprisingly no beard Skin color: Brown Build: Lean Distinguishing features: Prosthetic left arm
Profession: Scavenger Skills: Aquaboy, Looting, and Science Training: Experimentation Other abilities: Apparel: Metal armor with helmet and faceplate Weapons: Sniper rifle, Laser pistol Other equipment: Backpack full of food, Aqua Pura, and trinkets and scrap metal often tinkered with.
Affiliation: None Religious Belief: Atheist Sexual Preference: Heterosexual Relationship status: Single Personality: An intelligent, quiet man. Often found tinkering with scrap metal. A grim darkness in his eyes that reflect his reality.
History: Born in Rivet City to parents he would never know, Xandrek began his career stealing and working for local mechanics. Xandrek was framed for murdering one of his employer's rivals and exiled. He would begin life as a scavenger and built a small shelter out in the wasteland. He started a mechanical station buying and selling trinkets and would often venture out into the wasteland, searching for technological troves.
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Post by Zelus on Jan 9, 2016 8:50:17 GMT -5
Alrighty, sorry for the wait. Also welcome to the site. Been a bit busy so I've finally gotten around to looking at characters. (Feel free to start messaging people if you are waiting longer than two days). Firstly, if you could, please use the proper Fallout coding (with graphics). It's a small thing, but it gives uniformity to the profiles. Secondly, we really ask that you do at least three decently sized paragraphs for your history. I would suggest that you read the Current Status of the Wasteland thread as this will inform you of what's going on in DC, specifically in regards to Rivet City. All in all his history just needs to be more detailed. For instance, key life events. How did he grow up in a city without any parents? Who looked after him, where'd he get food? How did he lose his arm. That sort of thing. His personality could do with a few more sentences too, if you wouldn't mind. Once you get that done, we'll see about approving him.
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