LCpl Kyle Makiver

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LCpl Kyle Makiver Nov 3, 2013 9:11:13 GMT -5

Post by stag on Nov 3, 2013 9:11:13 GMT -5

LCpl. Kyle Makiver

Full Name: Kyle Sawyer Makiver

Call-sign: August-3

Nickname(s): Usually goes simply by Makiver

Species: Human

Homeworld: Earth

Age: 26

Sex: Male

Height: 6’3

Weight: 210 lbs

Eye Color: Blue

Hair Color: Brown

Hair Style: Buzz cut

Facial Hair: Goatee (Facial hair grows red)

Skin Color: White - Pale

Build: Endomorph – Broad shouldered, Heavily muscled, little definition

Distinguishing Features: Series of small scars on right side of face

Allegiance: UNSC

Rank: Lance Corporal

Assigned Squad: To be decided

MOS: 0311 Infantry/Grenadier

Assignment: Redoubt Outpost Alpha

Basic Training: Marine Infantry training, Advanced Combatives, Advanced Explosive Training

Armor: Marine BDU, M52B Body Armor, CH252 helmet

Weaponry: MA5C ICWS/ M301 40mm UGL
M45 Tactical Shotgun
M6C SOCOM
Varied Explosive (Mission dependant)
CQC WS Combat Knife

Other Equipment: Rucksack, Paracord bracelet, Field Waterproof Bible

Vehicle: N/A

Assigned A.I.: N/A

Religious Belief: Christian

Sexual Preference: Heterosexual

Relationship Status: Widower

Personality: Type ISFJ www.truity.com/isfj

Born: April 18, 2624, Lost Sea, Monroe County, Tennessee, Earth
Parents: Vicky D. Makiver – Mother John H. Makiver –Father
SSN: 384-42-0521
Enlisted: April 18, 2642
Notes: Received serious shoulder injury during a mountain patrol excerise. A collapse of the trail caused him to fall 15 feet onto a branch, impaling shoulder. 96% recovery.

2643: Stationed on UNSC Colony Barra
2644: Took Part in Operation Lightning War – Counter Insurgency. Involved in series of raids against suspected insurgents. Categorized Success
2648: Events at Joyus Exultation causes significant spike in insurgency on Barra. Operation Blood Feud enacted in response. Assigned to part of a EOD unit.
2649: Caught in Insurgent demolition of nightclub while on leave with wife. Extracted from rubble. Superficial injuries. Wife deceased. Recommended Psychological evaluation. Notes attached.
Notes: February 22, 2649. Experiences difficulty adjusting, suspected alcohol abuse. Suggested be put on immediate suicide watch.
May 2, 2649. Patient seems to have developed anxiety issues with enclosed spaces, Though I believe further sessions will help alleviate the problem.
August 12, 2649.Patient has requested transfer. I believe this is a good idea and have declared him fit for return to active duty.

2650: Assigned to UNSC Colony Redoubt Outpost Alpha

Last Edit: Nov 3, 2013 11:59:18 GMT -5 by stag

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LCpl Kyle Makiver Nov 3, 2013 10:29:41 GMT -5 via the ProBoards App

Post by ShockHelix on Nov 3, 2013 10:29:41 GMT -5

Okay, everything here looks good (that personality described thing is pretty cool) except your history. We like a little bit more depth on things, though the dates are a nice touch. First, we have no description of his early life, what his parents were like, what made him decide to join the UNSC, etc. you could also give a bit more info on his assignments, and maybe how he felt when his wife was killed and what kind of opinion he has on insurrectionist forces after an event like that. Add some more depth to his past, and you have my approval!

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LCpl Kyle Makiver Nov 3, 2013 10:52:28 GMT -5

Post by stag on Nov 3, 2013 10:52:28 GMT -5

Yeah, its been said before. I like to keep my profiles simple. I had one that was just the character's driver's license. I've always wanted to keep a lot of detail out of my profiles so it can be learned through character interaction. And I put the dates and kept it simple, because I was trying to get it to read like a service record...like a military file. I'll try to write up some psychiatry notes, perhaps.

ShockHelix Administrator Deity of Death No mercy for the weak. No pity for the dying. No tears for the slain. Posts: 666,666,949 Likes: 27	LCpl Kyle Makiver Nov 3, 2013 11:41:35 GMT -5 via the ProBoards App Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by ShockHelix on Nov 3, 2013 11:41:35 GMT -5 Alright, looks good now. You covered everything I mentioned, and also have a reason why he's being moved to Redoubt which works out nicely. You have my approval.

Zelus Global Moderator Posts: 772 Likes: 21	LCpl Kyle Makiver Nov 3, 2013 11:47:19 GMT -5 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Zelus on Nov 3, 2013 11:47:19 GMT -5 Looks fine to me, approved. Trusting Immortal to know if this guy fits in with canon, but... Seen as though he;s already brought stuff up, I'm sure it's good. Anywho, yeah go ahead and start posting with this guy now.

Post by stag on Nov 3, 2013 9:11:13 GMT -5

Post by ShockHelix on Nov 3, 2013 10:29:41 GMT -5

Post by stag on Nov 3, 2013 10:52:28 GMT -5

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Post by Zelus on Nov 3, 2013 11:47:19 GMT -5