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Post by unit894 on Dec 17, 2013 5:41:57 GMT -5
Dominic Vorkevsky Full Name: Dominic Vorkevsky Call-sign: D-894 Nickname(s):Dom, Domino Species: Human - Genetically Modified - SPARTAN-V Homeworld: Earth Age: 23 Sex: Male Height: 7"2" Without Armour 7"6" With Armour Weight: 200kg Eye Color: Blue Hair Color: Snow White Hair Style:Mohawk (short, to fit in helmet) Facial Hair: Shaved Skin Color: Pale Build: Skinny but muscled Distinguishing Features:Christian tattoos all over left arm Allegiance: UNSC Rank: Sergeant Assigned Squad: None MOS: Xenotechnology Assignment: In training Basic Training: SPARTAN training Armor: Air Assault (Completely white) Weaponry: Battle Rifle, Handgun, Combat knife on shoulder-sheath Other Equipment: Medkit, Ammo, Grenades Vehicle: Chopper Assigned A.I.: None Religious Belief: Christian Sexual Preference: Straight Relationship Status: Single Personality: Dom is cheerful, and jokey. He is loyal to those he cares about and considered close friends equal to family. He is very skilled with his hands, but prefers to act as a support gunner in a firefight. Dom was born into a poor farmers community in the Ural Mountains is Russia. He was taught to love God since he was little. When it was found he could qualify for SPARTAN training, he was encouraged to escape the poverty of his home by his parents, and was sent to a secret SPARTAN training facility. HI training and augmentation process were incredibly difficult and brutal, but he got through it in a fairly average way. He got into a habit of getting a tattoo whenever he beat another recruit in a sparring match. He won a lot. Dom found his love for Driving and Piloting, and specialized in it. When the option for learning field medic skills came up, he took that also. |
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Post by Zenios on Dec 17, 2013 10:03:54 GMT -5
I mean, I'd like to see a little more as far as personality and history go, but that's mostly just personal preference. I don't see anything wrong with it as is.
Except for the rank. I'm not sure if we're using Naval ranks for SPARTANs or Army/Marine ones. Maybe somebody else can shed a little more light on that?
Pending clarification on the rank issue, you can consider yourself halfway approved.
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Post by Stelpher on Dec 17, 2013 19:32:28 GMT -5
I'm pretty sure the rank is accurate, as The Master Chief was only a Petty Officer.
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Post by Zenios on Dec 18, 2013 0:40:14 GMT -5
John's a Master Chief Petty Officer, but the SPARTAN program has since grown to more than just a Naval Special Warfare project. It's a full-on military branch now.
Combine that with the fact that half our SPARTANs possess Marine ranks... and I don't know what to think.
I don't really think it's an issue. Dominic looks approvable either way. I was more pointing it out to try and goad the other mods into offering input c:
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Post by unit894 on Dec 18, 2013 8:33:39 GMT -5
I had him with a Marine rank, but in the thread he's joining, SPARTANS use Navy ranks.
Please direct all questions to Sal, it's his thread.
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Post by Zenios on Dec 22, 2013 21:14:46 GMT -5
Latest update on the Navy-versus-Marine-hierarchy thing: I talked to Immortal and he says all SPARTANs should be using Marine ranks. So, now that we've got that cleared up, we'll have to make everyone fix their characters' ranks at some point to conform to the standard. Because SPARTANs are SPARTANs and thus fall into that rank hierarchy, regardless of whether or not they're cross-training on a Covenant ship.
So I'd recommend switching him over to like Sergeant or something? I'm pretty sure that's the direct equivalent of PO2.
Do that quick fix and I guess maybe you'll be halfway approved again even though I gave that to you like a week ago?
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Post by unit894 on Dec 30, 2013 7:49:03 GMT -5
Changed back to Sergeant
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Post by ThreeDawg on Dec 31, 2013 13:14:49 GMT -5
ThreeDawg's Seal if Approval has been granted!
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