Salvahkiin
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My Siren's name is Brick, and she is the prettiest.
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Post by Salvahkiin on Mar 4, 2015 14:57:08 GMT -5
I believe I can. I've read a deal of the wiki, and I'll continue to do so while in the thread.
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Post by Endicott on Mar 4, 2015 17:14:24 GMT -5
The name also seems a little off. Are anglicised name present in Star Wars? Aside from Owen Lars, I haven't heard anyone with a vaguely anglicised surname.
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Post by aardvarklord on Mar 5, 2015 0:05:23 GMT -5
Okay, so, my BIIIIIG sticking point is the whole refusal to get involved in combat positions--not saying he should be on the frontlines, he's a consular--but even if he was a padawan at that point he'd be able to lay down the hurt (or healing) in a support position. If you want to stick with that, that's fine, though he would definitely have been pestered incessantly about it by anyone and everyone to try and get him into the fight. As for names, Leiah and Luke are pretty normal and I've seen some other normal ones, so that's fine. One other thing, are you absolutely, 100% certain that you want him to be a master? I'll let it go if you're positive, but he'll be put on the front-lines pretty quick consular or no and he'll be answering directly to Skywalker. As it is, I'm still debating whether or not to call Luke an actual master at this point or just functioning as a master (I'm leaning towards yes, but...). Also know that, as a master, he's gonna be a BIG target, by both my guy and the Imps. Also, little detail: amongst Jedi, I don't think calmness is a distinguishing feature. More of a trademark Still, I do like the idea of the core of his backstory well enough, just making sure you're aware of the repercussions of things. Also, out of curiosity, how was he hurt by Luke? Because if he was nipped by a saber, that would be a distinguishing feature (scars and all that).
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